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Proton
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Join date : 2009-10-20
Age : 30
Location : Canadialand
 |  Subject: Re: Mochran  Sun Jan 31, 2010 12:12 am | |
| It's pretty good, but some things are off to me:
The spinning gems in the intro seem shaky and needs some pixels trimmed of the edges.
The combo whirl seems too random and doesn't follow a suit.
The guard is too slow.
The down smash's quake starts off aways from him and comes toward him. Shouldn't the impact force the rocks to spread out from the sword?
The run's sword moves up and down while his hand/arm slightly shifts a few pixels. | |
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<Na>Suliboy
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Age : 31
Location : On the computer.
| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:19 pm | |
| Fixed entrance, added up special. | |
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zilch
Posts : 184
Join date : 2009-08-14
Location : at your favorite tv show
| | Subject: Re: Mochran Thu Feb 25, 2010 12:21 pm | |
| up special is... SUPER SPECIAL AWESOME so nice, it's so original, a projectile that goes upwards. | |
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<Na>Suliboy
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| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sat Mar 13, 2010 6:43 pm | |
| LBasdfsjkl;asfd. Question. 1 or 2?   Burst of fire or a traditional explosion? Also, working on a PA...  Meh. | |
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TimeCrunch
Posts : 64
Join date : 2010-03-13
Age : 31
Location : On The Computer
| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sat Mar 13, 2010 10:34 pm | |
| Epic, I will be saving a slot for this one along side with ShadowKirby | |
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<Na>Suliboy
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| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:01 pm | |
| Thanks, but, that doesn't answer my question... | |
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TimeCrunch
Posts : 64
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Age : 31
Location : On The Computer
| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:21 pm | |
| Your animations are unbelievable. | |
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<Na>Suliboy
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| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sun Mar 14, 2010 4:45 pm | |
| ... That still doesn't answer. >_> - Suliboy wrote:
- LBasdfsjkl;asfd.
Question.
1 or 2?
Burst of fire or a traditional explosion?
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Chick In A Box
Posts : 793
Join date : 2010-01-06
Age : 30
Location : Space
| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sun Mar 14, 2010 4:58 pm | |
| Burst of fire. Definitely burst of fire. | |
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Silvermark
Posts : 158
Join date : 2010-01-06
Age : 27
Location : Floating in space having tea with Malcom X
| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sun Mar 14, 2010 5:00 pm | |
| For once I agree with her. | |
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<Na>Suliboy
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| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sun Mar 14, 2010 5:26 pm | |
| - Silvermark wrote:
- For once I agree with her.
lolher. HER. :3 Okay, okay. | |
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TimeCrunch
Posts : 64
Join date : 2010-03-13
Age : 31
Location : On The Computer
| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sun Mar 14, 2010 5:29 pm | |
| "Agreed, I like the Burst of fire its a fast attack". | |
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zilch
Posts : 184
Join date : 2009-08-14
Location : at your favorite tv show
| | Subject: Re: Mochran Mon Mar 15, 2010 4:40 pm | |
| - <Na>Suliboy wrote:
- LBasdfsjkl;asfd.
Also, working on a PA...
Meh. you said it, meh!... i'm kidding, it looks good and his expression looks mean, you should start shading it by now. | |
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<Na>Suliboy
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| | Subject: Re: Mochran Fri Mar 19, 2010 9:26 pm | |
| Down special.  | |
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Mr. guy
Posts : 313
Join date : 2010-01-14
Location : I am nowhere, I am everywhere, I am the ninja.
| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:09 pm | |
| - Silvermark wrote:
- For once I agree with her.
You are aware that Raptor is a MAHN, right? | |
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Tengu Man
Posts : 280
Join date : 2010-01-15
Location : Searching for the damn triforce (inside Joke)
| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:15 pm | |
| - Mr. guy wrote:
- Silvermark wrote:
- For once I agree with her.
You are aware that Raptor is a MAHN, right? No she isnt. | |
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<Na>Suliboy
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| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sat Mar 27, 2010 7:22 pm | |
| Update:
Neutral, forward, back, and down aerials. | |
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Dark Lord
Posts : 316
Join date : 2009-08-13
Age : 28
Location : Australia
| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:48 am | |
| Looking Great. But I think this Animation:  It just seems a little bit "wrong" to me... | |
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<Na>Suliboy
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| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:53 am | |
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SC
Posts : 252
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Age : 32
Location : Australia
| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:57 am | |
| - <Na>Suliboy wrote:
- ...wrong? In what way?
Penis. | |
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<Na>Suliboy
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| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:58 am | |
| Except it doesn't really. It could be held in much more wrong ways.
DL, you sick minded bastard. | |
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Dark Lord
Posts : 316
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Age : 28
Location : Australia
| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sun Mar 28, 2010 4:09 am | |
| - <Na>Suliboy wrote:
- Except it doesn't really. It could be held in much more wrong ways.
DL, you sick minded bastard. NONONONONO! I didn't mean that! ^^' I meant, just the pose seems a bit stiff. I mean, like, uhrgh I give up. I was just meant to say that he could be more loose as now he just looks kinda weird going down like that. Damn Cee. ^^' | |
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<Na>Suliboy
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| | Subject: Re: Mochran Sun Mar 28, 2010 5:19 pm | |
| Up aerial added.
Now for the throws... | |
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iKinkajou
Posts : 42
Join date : 2010-01-05
| | Subject: Re: Mochran Wed Mar 31, 2010 3:34 pm | |
| F-air looks like it could be an insta-kill if it freezes in air.
And B-Air looks more like a N-Air.
Everything else looks good. | |
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<Na>Suliboy
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| | Subject: Re: Mochran Wed Mar 31, 2010 5:13 pm | |
| It wouldn't be an insta-kill unless you hit them really far out from the stage in a bottom corner.
B-air, it's back because the slash hits behind him and turns him around. | |
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