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Crater
Posts : 323 Join date : 2009-08-14 Age : 28 Location : Scatland
| Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 03, 2010 9:04 pm | |
| - <Na>Suliboy wrote:
- Uh. You never really want to use "my" or "I' really in a work title like this.
So that's issue one. Second, is a subtitle really neccessary? Plus the title itself is much too complex. Trigem by itself should suffice. And then a subtitle if you want, but something less ... odd. So like "TRIGEM: [One-to-three-word subtitle]" Pay no attention to the Mexican. He knows nothing of higher education. Feel free to have a longass title. I hear all the kool kats are doing it. | |
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<Na>Suliboy Admin
Posts : 632 Join date : 2009-08-11 Age : 31 Location : On the computer.
| Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 03, 2010 9:16 pm | |
| - Crater wrote:
- Suliboy wrote:
- Uh. You never really want to use "my" or "I' really in a work title like this.
So that's issue one. Second, is a subtitle really neccessary? Plus the title itself is much too complex. Trigem by itself should suffice. And then a subtitle if you want, but something less ... odd. So like "TRIGEM: [One-to-three-word subtitle]" Pay no attention to the Mexican. He knows nothing of higher education. Feel free to have a longass title. I hear all the kool kats are doing it. Oh sure. Make it as long as possible, I'm sorry. | |
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Spaghetti
Posts : 28 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 27 Location : Global-Warming-Obssessed Planet
| Subject: Re: Nope Sun Mar 07, 2010 1:43 pm | |
| lol, k. And yeah, the subtitle is really kinda dumb. Thanks suli. | |
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Mr. guy
Posts : 313 Join date : 2010-01-14 Location : I am nowhere, I am everywhere, I am the ninja.
| Subject: Re: Nope Fri Mar 12, 2010 5:52 pm | |
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Ungrateful Dead
Posts : 676 Join date : 2010-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Nope Fri Mar 12, 2010 6:53 pm | |
| Mr Guy, STFU No one cares about expansions but faggots | |
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indianchan
Posts : 454 Join date : 2009-08-12 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Nope Sun Mar 14, 2010 4:00 am | |
| - Mr. guy wrote:
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Go make an expansion. He has, many times. Shut your fucking mouth, don't come up in here and start acting like you know shit. Nigger. | |
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Spaghetti
Posts : 28 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 27 Location : Global-Warming-Obssessed Planet
| Subject: Re: Nope Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:21 pm | |
| I've started several, and never completed one. I want to, but at the moment I am extremely busy, and expansions are the last thing on my mind.
Also, I'd rather not just have 'bro' as the title. I want something else, so I'll be thinking and I'll post Ideas I have, and you can vote on them. K' thanks.
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indianchan
Posts : 454 Join date : 2009-08-12 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Nope Sun Mar 14, 2010 9:06 pm | |
| - Spaghetti wrote:
- I've started several, and never completed one. I want to, but at the moment I am extremely busy, and expansions are the last thing on my mind.
Also, I'd rather not just have 'Trigem' as the title. I want something else, so I'll be thinking and I'll post Ideas I have, and you can vote on them. K' thanks. I'm surprised that they're on your mind at all. | |
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Dastardly Bastard
Posts : 289 Join date : 2009-08-11 Age : 28 Location : Haters Gonna Hate.
| Subject: Re: Nope Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:40 pm | |
| Expansions are fucking dead.
Faggots like Mr. Guy should get over it. | |
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Spaghetti
Posts : 28 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 27 Location : Global-Warming-Obssessed Planet
| Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 17, 2010 5:43 pm | |
| Well, I spent over a year working on them and never completed one. I'd like to at least make Ben Meyer so its not a complete failure.
Also, name change. I hope its good. Oppinions? Also, the Raid of Fate is the title of the attack of bro and his broskis. But if you haven't read any of this before, then you won't understand a thing I just said. Also, broland is the continent broville is on.....once again, you need to read to understand.
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GreenThought
Posts : 25 Join date : 2010-03-17 Location : Anywhere You Want Me To Be
| Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 17, 2010 5:57 pm | |
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<Na>Suliboy Admin
Posts : 632 Join date : 2009-08-11 Age : 31 Location : On the computer.
| Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 17, 2010 6:01 pm | |
| I like Trigem more than Iryba as a main title. | |
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Chick In A Box
Posts : 793 Join date : 2010-01-06 Age : 30 Location : Space
| Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 17, 2010 6:02 pm | |
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Spaghetti
Posts : 28 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 27 Location : Global-Warming-Obssessed Planet
| Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 17, 2010 6:14 pm | |
| - <Na>Suliboy wrote:
- I like Trigem more than Iryba as a main title.
I agree *changes* I'll keep thinking. | |
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Dastardly Bastard
Posts : 289 Join date : 2009-08-11 Age : 28 Location : Haters Gonna Hate.
| Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 17, 2010 7:18 pm | |
| RAID OF FATE?
WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS, LEVEL 80 WoW?
Just shitting you, but you may want something else. | |
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Spaghetti
Posts : 28 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 27 Location : Global-Warming-Obssessed Planet
| Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 17, 2010 7:41 pm | |
| I completely agree. Its just temporary until something better comes to mind. | |
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indianchan
Posts : 454 Join date : 2009-08-12 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 17, 2010 8:14 pm | |
| - Spaghetti wrote:
- I completely agree. Its just temporary until something better comes to mind.
Trigem of Fate. | |
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Spaghetti
Posts : 28 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 27 Location : Global-Warming-Obssessed Planet
| Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 17, 2010 8:30 pm | |
| It wouldn't make sense, knowing my book, but thanks. | |
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Mr. guy
Posts : 313 Join date : 2010-01-14 Location : I am nowhere, I am everywhere, I am the ninja.
| Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 17, 2010 9:07 pm | |
| - indianchan wrote:
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Go make an expansion. He has, many times.
Shut your fucking mouth, don't come up in here and start acting like you know shit. Nigger. I'm sorry, totally my fault for not knowing. | |
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indianchan
Posts : 454 Join date : 2009-08-12 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Nope Thu Mar 18, 2010 4:24 pm | |
| - Mr. guy wrote:
- indianchan wrote:
- Mr. guy wrote:
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Go make an expansion. He has, many times.
Shut your fucking mouth, don't come up in here and start acting like you know shit. Nigger. I'm sorry, totally my fault for not knowing. Yeah, it is. Ignorant motherfucker. | |
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Spaghetti
Posts : 28 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 27 Location : Global-Warming-Obssessed Planet
| Subject: Re: Nope Thu Mar 18, 2010 7:50 pm | |
| Btw, I have this Dictionary type thing to help explain things in my book. I'd have to make a topic for it, but should I? Tell me yes or no and I'll decide based on the votes. kthnx. | |
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Spaghetti
Posts : 28 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 27 Location : Global-Warming-Obssessed Planet
| Subject: Re: Nope Sat Dec 11, 2010 4:01 pm | |
| Okay. I'm going to scrap that main idea and now I have started again, only keeping a few things from before. I realized a long time ago how terrible the whole idea and how many things just didn't make sense. So I restarted and changed a ton of stuff, even his name. His name is now Bruh Breh. He lives on the world Broterra, the continent Broland, the country Breh and the village of Bruhville. It all takes place in the The year it begins is 4908, which is similar to medieval times (they don't have BC and AD so that's why the year is so much higher than ours). The name of this book is "bro" for now. I'm thinking the subtitle should either be "brosters" (this is the new title for the war Broland is in instead of Hero's Raid.) or "Brah" (It's still in this book, but becomes important a lot later in the book and isn't as big of deal.
Anywho, It's changed a ton, and many agree that its a cooler story, bros. Here's the first and second chapters:
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bruh _________________________________
I'll try to get a summary up but I haven't even quite figured out what exactly will happen since I'm still trying to change things around.
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<Na>Suliboy Admin
Posts : 632 Join date : 2009-08-11 Age : 31 Location : On the computer.
| Subject: Re: Nope Wed Dec 22, 2010 7:36 pm | |
| oh wow people still post here
go to the official expansions forum now I guess? | |
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Spaghetti
Posts : 28 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 27 Location : Global-Warming-Obssessed Planet
| Subject: Re: Nope Tue Dec 28, 2010 9:23 pm | |
| Is there another one? Oh. I haven't been on for a long time. Where is it?
EDIT: oh never mind. Found it. Thanks for letting me know though. | |
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