Carl, the Deepwater Hunter

since this sprite was not made by me, i'll post it on acception
it's carl, he's a expert archer, ha controls water and he can control violet-fire from his hands
1.Idle-
2.Walk-
3.Run/Dash-
4.Jump-
5.Double Jump
6.Fall-
7.Land
8.Damage
9.Knockback
10.Dead
11.Get up
12.[ ]Hang
13.[ ]Recover from Hang

14.[ ]Roll
15.Crouch
16.Guard-
17.[ ]Taunt
18.[ ]Win
19.[ ]Lose
20.[ ]Entrance-
21.[ ]Item Swinging
22.[ ]Item Throwing

Smashes

23.Neutral-
24.Combo
25.[ ]Up Smash-
26.[ ]Side Smash-
27.[ ]Down Smash-
28.[ ]Dash Attack-

Tilts

29.[ ]Up Tilt
30.[ ]Side Tilt
31.[ ]Down Tilt

Specials

32.[ ]Neutral Special
33.[ ]Side Special

34.[ ]Up Special
35.[ ]Down Special


Aerials

36.[ ]Neutral Aerial
37.[ ]Up Aerial
38.[ ]Forward Aerial
39.[ ]Back Aerial
40.[ ]Down Aerial


Grabs

41.[ ]Grab
42.[ ]Pummel
43.[ ]Up Throw
44.[ ]Down Throw
45.[ ]Forward Throw
46.[ ]Back Throw

Other

47.[ ]Stock
48.[ ]Series Icon
49.[ ]Selection
50.[ ]Preview-
51.[ ]Trophies
-Classic
-Adventure
-All-Star
-Final Smash
52.[ ]Kirby Attack
53.[ ]Revival Platform
54.[ ]Damage Meter
55.[ ]Final Smash

sorry, a update error, please delete the other one

Alright.
Still, Naruto edit...
It needs a lot of work.

Yeah, you definately, above everything else, have to change the shirt design.
Then fix the dots.
Fix some anims.
(Insert everything else I said before).

D: Imposter.

In addition to the flaws SK pointed out, his hair is, er, flashing in the idle pose.

His secret technique is his flashing hair.

I don't understand what the guard is doing...
The angle that arm is at isn't going to block him from much, and why is he stomping on the ground?
I would think that would make for quite the mental distraction, doing that in such rhythm, that it would take away from his concentration, which is much needed while blocking an attack, which requires having to move your arms in just the right spot.

LivingShadow wrote:

I don't understand what the guard is doing...
The angle that arm is at isn't going to block him from much, and why is he stomping on the ground?
I would think that would make for quite the mental distraction, doing that in such rhythm, that it would take away from his concentration, which is much needed while blocking an attack, which requires having to move your arms in just the right spot.

Agreed.

And the motion of his leg is awkward enough anyway.

Y'know, the purpose of this forum is for serious, well made/thought up expansions. Not recolors.

His brother/cousin? made it, and zilch's just posting it for him.

that settles it then
i just needed your opinion since i can't critique him at all
this expansion it's not gonna make it like this
i'll sprite it at MY STYLE for when i have time
till then
*locks?

I'd lock, but it seems I can't.

well, i told my cousin the situation, i told him than if he edit the suit i'll improve the animations, he said DX, well locks until advice

update, the new spritestyle
how's it, was also made by my cousin, he's practicing and he's going well in my opinion

don't you love this one?

That's pretty friggin awesome.
Some stuff needs work, but its really good.

i'm amazed too, he is quite as good as me
guess practice does make miracles
i need my pc fixed DX so i can continue non-stopping spriting, i better stop playing sword of seals, damn game is so addictive