gmodplayer

Subject: gmodplayer Fri Mar 12, 2010 7:07 am

tell me what you think and how i can improve it
EDIT: made an animation
gmodplayer Idle10

Subject: Re: gmodplayer Fri Mar 12, 2010 7:23 am

Looks Ok.
Nice work

Posts : 73 Join date : 2010-02-07 Age : 28 Location : here

good
but this mustn t be here

i tell you this before someone insult you
and they probably will say that it is bad

Subject: Re: gmodplayer Fri Mar 12, 2010 1:13 pm

syco wrote:: good
but this mustn t be here

i tell you this before someone insult you
and they probably will say that it is bad

i dont get it, and by the way they know me

Subject: Re: gmodplayer Fri Mar 12, 2010 1:29 pm

I'll move this expansion Discussion Kirbman, this isn't the place for it until you've added more.
I can't see the image yet, because of my schools internet.
EDIT: Much Better,
I thought it would be the Doctor you play as, it makes more sense I guess, but Ok.
He should be holding a Gravity Gun, not just stand.

Subject: Re: gmodplayer Fri Mar 12, 2010 5:31 pm

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No.

Subject: Re: gmodplayer Fri Mar 12, 2010 5:51 pm

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Yes.

Posts : 676 Join date : 2010-01-19 Age : 30

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No. Absolutly not.

Subject: Re: gmodplayer Sat Mar 13, 2010 7:35 am

im probably going to remake the sprite from scratch

Subject: Re: gmodplayer Sat Mar 13, 2010 7:55 am

Kirbman, I wasn't around when you were on the old forums, but is your grammar really that bad?

Subject: Re: gmodplayer Sat Mar 13, 2010 11:39 am

Corka Cola wrote:: Kirbman, I wasn't around when you were on the old forums, but is your grammar really that bad?

im dutch thats why

Posts : 676 Join date : 2010-01-19 Age : 30

To be fair, a lot of members come from other countries and have better language.
But then again, you'll never need to know english if you live in a dutch speaking country.
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooo
Corka STFU

Subject: Re: gmodplayer Sat Mar 13, 2010 3:46 pm

English is the language of business.

Now then, the sprite sucks. The shading makes no sense and defies and any sort of light source. The line you have through the jeans should not cross over that far.

The facial features are atrocious. The nose is much more noticeable than those poorly made eyes. The face should also not be one level, then suddenly drop several inches as your shading insinuates.

I can't tell if that's hair or a helmet. Most hair isn't green, but ignoring that fact, what is making those lines in it? Also, unless it is really short, it should just stick to his head like that. Give it some body.

The hand covered by his body appears to be a copypasta of the visible hand with no change to the shading whatsoever.

The idle, oh god, the idle is terrible. He appears to be hoola-hooping whilst keeping his arms rigid against his body. My one question to you is 'What the hell?'

I'd also like to point out that that huge green space is unnecessary for showing us one sprite.

Subject: Re: gmodplayer Sat Mar 13, 2010 5:33 pm

卐 wrote:: I can't tell if that's hair or a helmet. Most hair isn't green, but ignoring that fact, what is making those lines in it? Also, unless it is really short, it should just stick to his head like that. Give it some body.

He wears a beanie. Just thought I'd throw that out there.

Subject: Re: gmodplayer Sat Mar 13, 2010 10:17 pm

Looks OK so far, I cant really judge it keep up the good work.

Subject: Re: gmodplayer Sun Mar 14, 2010 9:22 pm

Dastardly Bastard wrote:

卐 wrote:: I can't tell if that's hair or a helmet. Most hair isn't green, but ignoring that fact, what is making those lines in it? Also, unless it is really short, it should just stick to his head like that. Give it some body.

He wears a beanie. Just thought I'd throw that out there.

Thank you for pointing that out. I retract that statement, but the shading still sucks.