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Spaghetti
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 |  Subject: Nope  Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:11 am | |
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Spaghetti
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:14 am | |
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indianchan
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Feb 15, 2010 10:31 am | |
| This is the one where you turned into a wolf and hung out with other wolves after finding some ring, right? | |
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Chick In A Box
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Feb 15, 2010 10:32 am | |
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Spaghetti
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:21 am | |
| @Chan: Yup. I've improved it though.
@Mari: thanks.
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Marmalade
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:24 am | |
| - Spaghetti wrote:
- @Mari: thanks.
I'm laughing because he doesn't get the joke. | |
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Spaghetti
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:44 am | |
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Spaghetti
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:48 am | |
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ShadowKirby
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:34 pm | |
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<Na>Suliboy
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:37 pm | |
| Yeah. Please, I won't read past the first sentence at this point.
And you could also put it in a spoiler box so it doesn't take up the whole page. | |
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Friesnchip
Posts : 114
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Age : 31
Location : New Hampshire, United States
| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Feb 15, 2010 5:00 pm | |
| Wasn't I supposed to help you with this, and then you like, disappeared for a few months? | |
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Crater
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Feb 15, 2010 5:09 pm | |
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Friesnchip
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Feb 15, 2010 5:48 pm | |
| - Crater wrote:
- Marmalade wrote:
- Spaghetti wrote:
- @Mari: thanks.
I'm laughing because he doesn't get the joke. - Spaghetti wrote:
- ...?
Lern2internet
http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/cool-story-bro
Also, tl;dr  I felt this applied. | |
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Spaghetti
Posts : 28
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Age : 27
Location : Global-Warming-Obssessed Planet
| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:25 pm | |
| sorry, Never heard of it till now. Also, I'll get s a summary up soon. | |
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Spaghetti
Posts : 28
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Age : 27
Location : Global-Warming-Obssessed Planet
| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Mar 01, 2010 8:28 pm | |
| K, I've finally got a summary typed up. Â I want to have a long book, so the summary is a bit, long, although I probably could've shortened it up....oh well. Â Too lazy. Â Well, here it is:
bro goes bro...
comments?
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ShadowKirby
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Mon Mar 01, 2010 8:59 pm | |
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Chick In A Box
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:55 pm | |
| Ben puts on a ring, turns into a wolf, shit happens, he saves the world, the end. | |
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Spaghetti
Posts : 28
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Age : 27
Location : Global-Warming-Obssessed Planet
| | Subject: Re: Nope Tue Mar 02, 2010 8:20 pm | |
| - ShadowKirby wrote:
- Still too long.
yeah, sorry. I'll try to shorten it up. | |
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Mr. guy
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 03, 2010 7:35 am | |
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indianchan
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 03, 2010 4:25 pm | |
| The title sounds like a doujin. | |
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ShadowKirby
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 03, 2010 4:34 pm | |
| - indianchan wrote:
- The title sounds like a doujin.
... Lol'd. | |
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indianchan
Posts : 454
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 03, 2010 5:24 pm | |
| - ShadowKirby wrote:
- indianchan wrote:
- The title sounds like a doujin.
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Lol'd. A doujin with a blatant typo, to be specific. | |
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Chick In A Box
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 03, 2010 7:00 pm | |
| - indianchan wrote:
- ShadowKirby wrote:
- indianchan wrote:
- The title sounds like a doujin.
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Lol'd. A doujin with a blatant typo, to be specific. Oh my god. He misspelled Welders. | |
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Spaghetti
Posts : 28
Join date : 2010-01-18
Age : 27
Location : Global-Warming-Obssessed Planet
| | Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 03, 2010 8:01 pm | |
| Yes, the title isn't very good, especially the subtitle. If you have any suggestions to help improve, please mention them. | |
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<Na>Suliboy
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| | Subject: Re: Nope Wed Mar 03, 2010 8:36 pm | |
| Uh. You never really want to use "my" or "I' really in a work title like this.
So that's issue one. Second, is a subtitle really neccessary?
Plus the title itself is much too complex.
Trigem by itself should suffice. And then a subtitle if you want, but something less ... odd.
So like
"TRIGEM: [One-to-three-word subtitle]" | |
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